Is my story good so far which readers will like?

Okay, couldn't get past the first four words. Cliched, bad grammar, and just bad. Awkward. Needs a lot of work. And please don't say your age. I don't care how old you are. When you say you are a 14 year old writer, it's like already putting you down. Like, you aren't a writer. You're just someone who wants to write that's young so people will take pity on you. Not to mention, you spelt words wrong just in that first sentence saying you are writing a story. No, it can't be read by every age because most people can't get past the first few words.